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Weightlifting Sonnet

November 18th 2006 18:54


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Been lifting weights - I think it's working out
But others might think it's fooling around
Bench-pressing less than fifty times one pound
Which is more than handfuls of Sauerkraut
And would case damage if dropped on my snout
My nose seems bigger than the muscles found

On my arm bones, which rarely make a sound
Or a face, but they would probably pout

But they're big enough to make me feel sore
After like fifty times raising the bar -
A singular entity since so far
All of the barbells remained on the floor

I may not be ready to win a fight
But I'm strong enough to push keys and write
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Comment by katyzzz

November 18th 2006 20:54

Comment by Adele

November 19th 2006 00:06
Excellent, Ethan. And it's one of my favorite subjects, too.

Comment by Chris Rayson

November 19th 2006 10:39
thats a really good poem and its nasty creative
thanks for sharing it with us.
Please visit my site, i visited urs so make an effort to visit mine and vote or make an opinion.

"AFL Kid"

Comment by Stanley

November 21st 2006 01:48
hahaha that is gold! i really liked this keep up the good work!

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