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Sonnet from my 17,000 word book/poem

January 4th 2007 22:51
This was written for, and is part of, the giant book/poem that I wrote in 2005. However, it doesn't have much to do with the plot, such that one exists, so it wouldn't be a potential spoiler like the other sections of the poem that are written in sonnet form. And here it is:

My feelings are still quite hard to express
To let you know I did often intend
But feared that I might lose you as a friend
If all my emotions I did confess
Part of me thinks that I'll become a mess
If what we've got right now came to an end
But each day it gets harder to pretend
That not having more does not cause distress

Most times that I see you it makes me smile
For some reason that reaction's delayed
I can't erase the grin later that day
You might see it if you stayed for a while
Now that I have laid my heart bare like this
Is it too much to ask you for a kiss?
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Comment by Adele

January 4th 2007 23:21

Comment by Stanley

January 6th 2007 08:02
great poem. i really liked this one but the most impressive bit was compiling a book that size!

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