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Sonnet Inspired by Alcohol

October 13th 2006 04:29
How much of this was inspired by personal experience? Feel free to guess.



The geyser inside me may spray no more
But inside my head the hammers still pound
I crossed a line after my fourth was downed
Of 151’s presence I am sure
They were concocted behind a closed door

You might’ve heard judgment is rarely sound
Where a single sober soul can’t be found
And that’s why my appetite is so poor

No measure of pleasure is worth this hurt
But did last night bring me pleasure at all?
Maybe I’m lucky that I can’t recall
Events between 2 and waking by dirt

But I wasn’t arrested. Man, that’s great!
And quite enough reason to celebrate


If questions are asked, they will be answered.
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Comment by Adele

October 14th 2006 03:59
Ouch, that was painful to read. If it was inspired by personal experience, you'll feel better once you've showered and eaten. If you're really in bad shape, you should eat, then shower.

Comment by The Daily Sonnet

October 14th 2006 04:33
It was actually inspired by a combination of the worst experiences that I've ever had. It's been a while since I've actually been close to that miserable. But thanks for your concern/advice.

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